[FP]The kids found faded love (F.O.B. x Rihanna x Alan W.)

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[FP]The kids found faded love (F.O.B. x Rihanna x Alan W.)

Post Sat Feb 08, 2020 7:07 pm

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Title: DJ Axcess - The Kids found faded love (Fall Out Boy vs. Rihanna vs. Alan Walker)

Source 1: Fall Out Boy - The kids aren't alright (Instrumental)
Source 2: Rihanna - We found love (Acapella)
Source 3: Alan Walker - Faded (Acapella)

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Sorry, no cover picture yet, as I don't think this is 100% done yet.
That's why I am posting here to get some more feedback. ;)

EDIT: made a little cover pic while waiting for feedback on the track itself. :1wink:

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Re: The kids found faded love (Fall Out Boy x Rihanna x Alan

Post Thu Feb 13, 2020 9:28 pm

I really like this combination. :1grin:

I do have a couple of suggestions, though.
1. When "Faded" comes in, the energy boosts in the instrumental, but it's coming across as harsh to my ears each time it does. It's the whistles that are doing the most damage, but you probably don't have the stems. I would simply pull the volume back a bit on those sections to reduce the harshness.
2. Rihanna's vocals seem to be a speck late at times between 0:30 and 0:35
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Re: The kids found faded love (Fall Out Boy x Rihanna x Alan

Post Fri Feb 14, 2020 7:56 am

Thanks satis5d,

I noted your concerns and I had the same concerns about this before.
Actually I even thought about deleting this again and putting it on hold for a while
as I am working on several other tracks lately.

After the IMMENSE feedback I got to "Perfect Mirror",
I should definitely try to keep the audio quality high, as this brought me
quite a few new followers and made me worry about the audio quality of this one.

I'll definitely continue working on this soon, but right now there's a few others that
I will prioritize and upload here soon. But yeah, those 2 concerns of yours will be
my main priority concerning this track and I'll definitely try to fix this.

Thanks for your feedback and have a happy valentine's day.

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Re: The kids found faded love (Fall Out Boy x Rihanna x Alan

Post Mon Feb 17, 2020 12:02 am

Nice combo, Axcess.

While I echo satis5d's sentiments about the choruses, I feel it's probably pretty easily tackled with some EQing on the instrumental. And though you planning on working on this some more, I will go ahead and give you the thumbs-up on this in the mean time.

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Re: (!) The kids found faded love (F.O.B. x Rihanna x Alan W

Post Mon Mar 02, 2020 12:27 pm

Updated version:

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Version in original post has been renamed to "_v1.mp3"

Timing issue between 0:30 and 0:35 should be ironed out now.
Some slight EQing and dynamics on the instrumental.

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Re: (!) The kids found faded love (F.O.B. x Rihanna x Alan W

Post Mon Mar 09, 2020 4:19 pm

Version 2 is a big improvement, although subtle. I'm on the fence about FP-ing this one. I'd like to hear what a third Mod has to say about it. If another week passes without input, I'll probably give it my recommend.
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Re: (!) The kids found faded love (F.O.B. x Rihanna x Alan W

Post Sat Apr 25, 2020 9:51 am

Bump
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Re: (!) The kids found faded love (F.O.B. x Rihanna x Alan W

Post Mon Apr 27, 2020 12:22 am

satis5d wrote:Bump
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Re: (!) The kids found faded love (F.O.B. x Rihanna x Alan W

Post Mon May 25, 2020 3:26 am

Allow me to bump thee

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Re: (!) The kids found faded love (F.O.B. x Rihanna x Alan W

Post Thu May 28, 2020 11:55 pm

Great combo, nice melange of complementary styles.

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