Airplanes In My House (B.o.B vs. Flo Rida) [Reupload]

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Airplanes In My House (B.o.B vs. Flo Rida) [Reupload]

Post Sun Sep 29, 2019 4:25 pm

DJ BeeEss - Airplanes In My House (B.o.B vs. Flo Rida)

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B.o.B Ft. Hayley Williams - Airplanes (Studio Acapella) + Download (HD)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BN1ku27AXxQ


flo rida - my house instrumental

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DC7-dQZdDAM

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Re: Airplanes In My House (B.o.B vs. Flo Rida) [Reupload]

Post Wed Oct 09, 2019 4:47 pm

It's got potential, but it's a bit rough. The main thing it needs is some polishing, which requires technical expertise and experience. I'm not sure that you have those skills yet, but if not, you are in the right place! I didn't have those skills 4 years ago either.

What I did, and what I recommend that you do, is to listen to the greats (Wax Audio, Robin Skouteris, DJ Schmolli, Happy Cat Disco, DJ Y Alias JY, etc.) and take notice of how their work always sounds as good as what you hear on the radio. You must first train your ear to hear what isn't right, even when you've found a working combination like this one is.

Your ending sounds like you were in a hurry to get this project finished. It's indicative of the issues that exist in other areas of the mix.

I know it sounds like I'm being harsh, but you've clearly got an ear for what works. Now you've got to train your ear for what isn't working and learn what it takes to make things better. When you have specific questions, you're likely to get a very thorough answer from one of the Mods.

Keep at it. This mashup has Front-Page potential. :1smiley:
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Re: Airplanes In My House (B.o.B vs. Flo Rida) [Reupload]

Post Thu Oct 10, 2019 7:04 pm

Thanks for the critique! :1smiley: I appreciate your feedback, and I know what you mean. I've been struggling to figure out how they get their audio to sound so clear, and would love to know how to do that. Right now I'm in my sophomore year of high school, and have been trying to get that sound since I was about 9 years old :1laugh: I know the basics of Virtual DJ and practically learned everything I know from my father. And right now I'm kind of testing out this website and Sowndhaus to get feedback from other DJs, and just get my stuff out there for people to listen to.
Anyway, thanks again for your feedback. I'll take it into consideration :1wink: :1cool:

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Re: Airplanes In My House (B.o.B vs. Flo Rida) [Reupload]

Post Fri Oct 11, 2019 2:11 pm

The idea is nice, but this combination has already made :1cry:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=26ybzY5LwG0

The good side is that this version might help you learn how to improve your next one :1wink:

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Re: Airplanes In My House (B.o.B vs. Flo Rida) [Reupload]

Post Mon Oct 14, 2019 3:41 am

SMASH wrote:The idea is nice, but this combination has already made :1cry:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=26ybzY5LwG0


What a pity, i prefer your version because of the structure :1wink:

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