(!) CVS - The Short Sexual Episode (Marvin Gaye + Dr. Dre)

[CVS]

Abandoned, I cannot get it right.
Marvin-mental with dre-pella was a great combo: now the other way around they are in different keys?

[satis5d]

There are a few "blue notes" here and there, but this is straight-up fun. I'm in.

[Happy Cat Disco]

I'm having a hard time getting past the Out of key issue Satis5d has mentioned.

[CVS]

Thanks HCD for your comment (and Satis5d for the recommend). But the mirror mashup (mental and pella switched) had NO remarks here on Mashstix on key - except for the last syllable (!) of dagadaga-daaa in 6 (yes/no) of the 12 repeats. Please point out where the blue notes are, so I can try to fix it.

[Happy Cat Disco]

It sounds like the instrumental is Ebm while the vocal is Ebmaj.
Try pull all of the vocals G notes down -1 semitone to F# (Gb) and that will take care of many of the key issues.

[CVS]

Thanks HCD, changed the G-notes to F# like you suggested. In a lot of places they are short and followed by a G# (that turns to a new G).

New version 2 is up in orginal post. (EDIT now deleted)

[Happy Cat Disco]

Now it's just chaos. I'm sorry.
The Gs were bad but so are the B's and the note directions. The bottom line is they are out of key by +3 semitones on the vocals. This means the notes and the progressions as they are simply don't match.

[CVS]

HCD, thanks for listening again.