(FP) Alone In My World (Olive Vs FATE)

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(FP) Alone In My World (Olive Vs FATE)

Post Sat Jun 16, 2018 6:20 am

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Alone In My World(Olive Vs FATE)
Vocal: Olive - You're Not Alone | https://youtu.be/s4oZdUV-G-Y
Instrumental: FATE - Not My World | https://youtu.be/JYUlevGQpAA

Sry not been around much put my back out only able to sit for short periods, but getting better \o/

I heard this instrumental in my SC feed and the atmosphere reminded me of something - dark n stylish future wave Olive was born ;)

Space telephone style EQ / De Ess / multi-delays and some occasional warping to fit the vocals pre-chorus mainly.

Hopefully back for longer soon :) looks like it's been busy \o/

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Re: Alone In My World(Olive Vs FATE)

Post Sat Jun 16, 2018 4:25 pm

SgtMash wrote:Sry not been around much put my back out only able to sit for short periods, but getting better \o/

Yikes. Hopefully things improve for you.

Your creative capacity does not appear to be thrown out :1smiley: The vocal processing on this is very nice.

Very minor nitpick: occasionally the vocal sounds a bit out of tune (e.g., "apart" at 2:07). Also (and this is above my pay grade) there might be a sub-semitone shift required to the vocal.

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Re: Alone In My World(Olive Vs FATE)

Post Tue Jun 19, 2018 2:01 am

Welcome back from your hiatus. Hope your back is better soon.

Agreeing with warezio--vocals do sound out of tune...I think they are a few cents sharp, but it’s hard to tell. The effects are nice but I feel like they may magnify the tuning issues. :1undecided:

I have to nitpick about the width of the vocals too! :1cheesy: Did you narrow them? It always sounds odd when the backing vocals are narrow and the instrumental is wide. The lead vocals don’t bother me. I’m just wondering if the acapella came in mono or if your processing narrowed the backing vocals…

Otherwise, sounds like vintage SgtMash!

Now listening to the original I hear how out of tune Olive’s vocals are, even in the original. Clearly she didn’t use AutoTune like everyone else! :1laugh: Do you have Melodyne with which to tune them up a bit?

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Re: Alone In My World(Olive Vs FATE)

Post Thu Jun 21, 2018 4:24 pm

...what they said.

But my less-than-golden ears didn't pick up the subtle tuning problems. I recommend.

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Re: (!) Alone In My World (Olive Vs FATE)

Post Fri Jun 22, 2018 3:09 am

i like it !
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Re: (FP) Alone In My World (Olive Vs FATE)

Post Sat Jun 23, 2018 8:44 pm

Nice, reminds me of Portishead, but played from a robot in space.
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Re: (FP) Alone In My World (Olive Vs FATE)

Post Tue Jun 26, 2018 11:25 am

YITT wrote:Nice, reminds me of Portishead, but played from a robot in space.


<3 exactly what I was aiming for :1laugh:

ty for the FP guys

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