[FP] Big Dog Oughta Know Better(A. Morissette Vs Guillemots)

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Re: Big Dog Oughta Know Better(Alanis Morissette Vs Guillemo

Post Thu Apr 19, 2018 2:40 pm

Version 2 sounds better, I'm very close to recommend but I'm not fully sure if you nailed them all, the first chorus sounds OK to me, but i'm not sure about the second and the third, it sounds like you are still a bit off there :1undecided:
Lets wait for the others...

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Re: Big Dog Oughta Know Better(Alanis Morissette Vs Guillemo

Post Fri Apr 20, 2018 1:38 am

I think you are right... I thought I'd replicated the tuning from the 1st in the 2 & 3... idk if I was dreaming or I rendered the wrong one...lemme take a look as I agree 1st one sounds right the next two don't...

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Re: Big Dog Oughta Know Better(Alanis Morissette Vs Guillemo

Post Mon Apr 23, 2018 2:18 am

Actually addressed the tuning now (probably?!) and tweaked the triplet Vs drum hits at the end into line better.

Thanks 4 bearing with me MashGyver / All o.O

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Re: Big Dog Oughta Know Better(Alanis Morissette Vs Guillemo

Post Mon Apr 23, 2018 10:41 pm

So, the key issues sound resolved, although I have to admit they were a bit tough to get used to as a listener at first. By the end I think I was more used to it. The triplets part seems better--it may not be possible to turn out how I imagined it, but it’s definitely less awkward the way you currently have it. We will await the opinions of others now...

But in the mean time, you’ve got my blessing...
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Re: (!) Big Dog Oughta Know Better(A. Morissette Vs Guillemo

Post Tue Apr 24, 2018 1:14 am

yea had my "that's not what it sounds like" bells ringing...

<honesty edit> Lol in fact if I'm honest I think that's why I edited the 1st chorus as I did then kinda asked you again (idk why I didn't just say "listen to it like this, listen like you suggest r u sure" ...guess I was nervous about doubting the MashGyver with my limited (zero) musical theory skills and wonky ears :p) But after couple listens through I got behind it as it now is :1rolleyes: insecurity is a beech & sorry xx

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Re: (!) Big Dog Oughta Know Better(A. Morissette Vs Guillemo

Post Wed Apr 25, 2018 2:51 am

hi Sgt, IMO, the chorus still does not work in this mashup (particulary the 1st) :1embarassed:

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Re: (!) Big Dog Oughta Know Better(A. Morissette Vs Guillemo

Post Wed Apr 25, 2018 3:19 am

DRA'man wrote:hi Sgt, IMO, the chorus still does not work in this mashup (particulary the 1st) :1embarassed:

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nvm - I got Beiber to mash next ;)

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Re: (!) Big Dog Oughta Know Better(A. Morissette Vs Guillemo

Post Mon Apr 30, 2018 6:01 pm

Sometimes all a mashup needs is the right Mod to give it a listen. :1wink:

This one's a little different, but for the right audience, it's verrrry nice. Two thumbs up here!

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Re: [FP] Big Dog Oughta Know Better(A. Morissette Vs Guillem

Post Tue May 01, 2018 2:51 am

as an after-FP remark: (never stop asking, always improving)
I think you also changed the "away" as a last syllable in the (first) chorus. Maybe in the other choruses you did just what the doctor (MashGyver had examples) ordered; and DRA'man noticed that?

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Re: [FP] Big Dog Oughta Know Better(A. Morissette Vs Guillem

Post Tue May 01, 2018 2:53 am

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