Only the third ever mash here from Pokedex. He use’s one of the worlds best feel good songs in Jump by Van Halen. I like the ‘Super Ted’ start, brings back all the memories ....
Cons:
There are a few errors. The rap acapella does not work with the Van Halen classic, also there are bits were you can hear your join between the original Jump, and what I presume is a Karaoke version (check your volumes).
Tips:
Keep on doing what you’re doing, you show promise. But don’t be afraid to try something other than rap. I’ve sent you some links for acapella sites, use them. Once you start using something with real harmonies, you results will be ten times as good.
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Dj Submitted - Added 06/28/09 Learning To Touch The Sky
(Mix)
This is totally fresh A+B mashup, I love the way you mix all the elements of the track, the mash duration, all the elements and your audio quality are great. You’ve made a new fresh and easy listening song, congratulations mate !!!!
Cons:
The track is great but I would change the intro, because is it doesn't say anything about your creation. I think that intro doesn't have power at all. But that’s all I can think of.
Tips:
I encourage you to change your intro part to make more powerful track presentation, remember the intro is like the "presentation card" of the song. You may have a top 10 mash here.
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Dj Submitted - Added 06/26/09 Two Songs With Nothing In Common
(The Cranberries vs. Beastie Boys)
Clear and good quality source material and well beat matched. The Cranberries song is a gorgeous tune. Technically it's quite nicely produced with no real equalising problems. Keying issues for this track is also N/A due to the nature of the Beastie Boys vocal.
Cons:
It felt to me that 75% of the playing time was just taken up with the original Cranberries song just floating along with sporadic elements of the Beasties chucked in for not particularly great a measure. To me the Beastie Boys track is that tuneless you could have chosen a LOT better choice of track from them I felt. Halfway through the track though you crashed the Cranberries vocals with The Beastie Boys for a verse which added to the overall muddledness of it all. It's an odd one this because it's not all THAT bad. It's just the ill fitting vocal that really lets it down. I don't think your track really knows what it wants to be and I'm guessing neither did you really, judging by it's title.
Tips:
Technically you are pretty much there. I would really like to hear you produce a more tuneful track that really shows off your potential, as this is a pretty dull affair ~ bar the gorgeous sugar coated fluffiness that is The Cranberries. Also try and state what source material you used as well, as I wanted to track down The Cranberries track but didn't know what it was called!
